IELTS Booster Lab Listening
Day 57 IELTS Listening Practice - Tutor Giving Assignment Feedback
Section 3 academic feedback practice for tutor advice, essay revision, strengths, weaknesses, sources, conclusions, deadlines, and meeting plans.
Practice Instructions
- Listen once without pausing.
- Answer all 10 questions.
- Check the answer key.
- Replay the mistakes only.
- Read the transcript after trying.
- Write one weak point for tomorrow.
Questions 1-5
Complete the feedback notes below. Write ONE WORD AND/OR A NUMBER for each answer.
Assignment Feedback
- The assignment topic was urban __________.
- The strongest part of the essay was the __________.
- The introduction needs a clearer __________.
- The tutor says the student used too many __________.
- The student should add one more academic __________.
Questions 6-10
Complete the revision plan below. Write ONE WORD AND/OR A NUMBER for each answer.
Revision Plan
- The student should shorten the section about __________.
- The tutor recommends using a simple __________.
- The conclusion should mention future __________.
- The revised assignment is due on __________.
- The next meeting will be in the tutor's __________.
Answer Key
- transport
- examples
- argument
- quotations
- source
- history
- table
- research
- Thursday
- office
Distractor Explanations
- The student mentions housing, but the assignment topic was urban transport.
- The tutor says the structure is acceptable, but the strongest part is the examples.
- The title is clear enough; the introduction needs a clearer argument.
- The problem is not too few quotations. The student used too many.
- The student suggests Friday, but the tutor says Thursday.
- The library is too noisy, so the next meeting will be in the tutor's office.
Transcript
Tutor: Thanks for coming in, Daniel. I have read your assignment on urban transport.
Daniel: I was worried it sounded more like a housing essay because I mentioned apartment blocks in the first paragraph.
Tutor: That part is only background. Your main topic is clearly urban transport, so that is fine.
Daniel: Good. What did you think was the strongest part?
Tutor: The examples were the strongest part. Your structure is acceptable, but the examples from two cities made the essay more convincing.
Daniel: I thought the introduction was okay because the title was clear.
Tutor: The title is clear enough, but the introduction needs a clearer argument. At the moment, it describes the topic but does not say what you will prove.
Daniel: I can fix that. Should I add more quotations from the articles?
Tutor: Actually, you used too many quotations. Try to paraphrase more and only quote when the exact wording is important.
Daniel: Right. I used several websites. Is that enough?
Tutor: Websites are useful, but you should add one more academic source, such as a journal article or book chapter.
Daniel: I also wondered if the statistics section was too long.
Tutor: Keep the statistics section. The part you should shorten is the history section because it delays your main analysis.
Daniel: For the results, I was planning to add a long chart with all the survey numbers.
Tutor: A long chart would be hard to read. Use a simple table with only the most important numbers.
Daniel: What should I do with the conclusion? I mainly repeated my main points.
Tutor: You can briefly repeat them, but the conclusion should also mention future research.
Daniel: I can revise it by Friday.
Tutor: I need to check it before then, so please send the revised assignment on Thursday.
Daniel: Okay. Should we meet in the library again?
Tutor: The library is too noisy this week. Let's meet in my office after lunch.
Daniel: Thanks. I will revise the argument, reduce the quotations, and add the extra source.
Mistake-Review Point
In tutor feedback, listen for the final advice after polite comments. The tutor may praise one part, then correct another part.
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